BR21: “A Dog in London”

I read a book whose title is “A Dog in London” Kipper, Chip, and Biff were I know for some books before I read. Their grandmother came to stay. She brought presents for everyone, and had promised to take the children on were outing. She would take you all to London, so they prepared to go there. When they got to London, they took the tube because it was the best way to get around. However, the platform was with lots of people.
First, they went to Trafalgar Square. There were lots of pigeon in there. They knew that pigeons were so greedy. Second, they went to Buckingham Palace. This is where the Queen lives. They saw a big car drove past and everyone cheered. Biff said”The Queen might ride on that car.” Third, they took on a boat, and went under Tower Bridge. When the bridge began to open, the children were excited. Final, they went to the waxwords. It has wax models of famous people. The people weren’t real. The children and their grandmother had a happening. It was their grandmother fallen over these models’ head because she dropped her handbag. She and her children picked the models up before anyone sees, but they thought the heads aren’t right. A lady who is a employee was angry very much, so they were sorry. When they got home, their car was breakdown, so they were transported by breakdown service’s truck. I thought the model’s head were… No way! You may laugh when you saw under the two pictures!!
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